Shoot! (I messed up my essay)

1.    MLA format check.

2.    Drafts and reading-  what to look for? Works Cited page?

Integrating quotes-  3 ways.

Al;sdkfjal;sdkjfal;dj, “………………….”

“……………………” alk;sdjrqweo;afja;dkl.

Ereaf “…………” alksdjfkl;ajs;af sdkl;ja.

No way words.   Pres tense.

Good

Great

Like

Show

Beautiful

Very

Really

Stuff

Things

I believe

I think

Can

Could

Would

Should

Get

Getting

Gotten

Nice

Like

Happy

was

Anything

Going

Most

Many

Pretty

Ugly

A lot

Often

Better

Feel

Be

Been

Being

Worst

Bad

Okay

Average

Same

So

Started

Best

Greatest

were

By

Amazing

Awesome

Cool

Lame

Had

Done

Doing

Worse

Everything

Something

Nothing

About

Gave

Make

Take

Took

Taken

Made

Making

Gone

Give

3.    Should we read the poem together?

4.    Intro to some art historically?

5.    When’s the art museum?

6.    Final Draft due Thursday.

1.  Why'd you pick what you picked?

2.  Writing about art- and poetry, too.  Notes...'

3.  When's the essay due?-  Tuesday.  MLA format

4.  When's the real art museum?-  Sept 29th. 

5.  HW-  Essay about this poem? 

6.  My papa's waltz-  Rothke?

No Journal-

Names

TS test

Going over Plath

Notes-

Poetry Writing-

MLA FORMAT

5 paragraphs, thesis, write how we’ve been practicing.

Original analysis, original thought, backed up by copious references and quotes to the poem.

In “Daddy” by Sylvia Plath, the author employs metaphor to create the theme.

Metaphor, theme 3-5 quotes

Metaphor, theme 3-5

Metaphor, theme 3-5

Conclusion

Works Cited Page

HOME WORK!

Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold.
Her early leafs a flower;
But only so an hour.
Then leaf subsides to leaf.
So Eden sank to grief,
So dawn goes down to day.
Nothing gold can stay.

What the theme?  Why is it the theme?

Cont. Thinking.

Test,

Names,

3.5  Continuing analysis practice-  Grass is always greener on the other side.

4.  Hink Pink, if time.


5.  Poem-  Rothke Student.


6.  HW-  Daddy- Plath, and Lady Lazarus

TS, cont.

1.  Names and Test

2.  Journal-  Did you like the poem?  Why/not?  Is it a good poem?  Why/not?  What is the theme of the poem and why?

3.  Lateral TS cont.

3.5  Continuing analysis practice-  Grass is always greener on the other side.

4.  Hink Pink, if time.

1.  Journal-  Connect yourself to a movie or book you've read....book preferred.

2.  Test

2.5 Poem-  Discussion.

3.  Thinking Skill Games, Cont. 

3.5 Proverb Writing... What it means, why it means what it means.

4.  HW-  Poem, again, Let Evening Come. 

5.  HW- Paragraph about the poem.  What it means, why it means what it means.