Tuesday, September 29, 2015

Continuing with writing about the art of writing, let's do something really, really hard.

Please read the following poem.  Working with those around you, figure out on your own what the author is saying--  What's the message and why?

Some background, first.

What's a sonnet?

Who was GMH?


No worst, there is none. Pitched past pitch of grief,
More pangs will, schooled at forepangs, wilder wring.
Comforter, where, where is your comforting?
Mary, mother of us, where is your relief?
My cries heave, herds-long; huddle in a main, a chief
Woe, wórld-sorrow; on an áge-old anvil wince and sing —
Then lull, then leave off. Fury had shrieked 'No ling-
ering! Let me be fell: force I must be brief."'

    O the mind, mind has mountains; cliffs of fall
Frightful, sheer, no-man-fathomed. Hold them cheap
May who ne'er hung there. Nor does long our small
Durance deal with that steep or deep. Here! creep,
Wretch, under a comfort serves in a whirlwind: all
Life death does end and each day dies with sleep.

Thursday:  Alchemist Test,   Please read "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock and notate your reading. 

Thursday, September 24, 2015

Long Journal- Using thinking and writing to solve problems....



Meanwhile, somewhere in the state of Colorado, armed to the teeth with thousands of flowers,
two boys entered the front door of their own high school and for almost four hours
gave floral tributes to fellow students and members of the staff
beginning with red roses strewn among unsuspecting pupils during their lunch hour,
followed by posies of peace lilies and wild orchids.
Most thought the whole show was one elaborate hoax using silk replicas of the real thing, plastic imitations, exquisite practical jokes,
but the flowers were no more fake than you or I,
and were handed out as compliments returned, favors repaid, in good faith, straight from the heart.
No would not be taken for an answer.
Therefore a daffodil was tucked behind the ear of a boy in a baseball hat,
and marigolds and peonies threaded through the hair of those caught on the stairs or spotted along corridors
until every pupil who looked up from behind a desk could expect to be met with at least a petal or a dusting of pollen,
if not an entire daisy chain, or the color-burst of a dozen foxgloves, flowering for all their worth, or a buttonhole to the breast.
Upstairs in the school library, individuals were singled out for special attention:
some were showered with blossom, others wore their blooms like brooches or medallions;
even those who turned their backs or refused point-blank to accept such honors were decorated with buds,
unseasonable fruits and rosettes the same as the others.
By which time a crowd had gathered outside the school,
drawn through suburbia by the rumor of flowers in full bloom, drawn through the air like butterflies to buddleia,
like honey bees to honeysuckle, like hummingbirds dipping their tongues in,
some to soak up such over-exuberance of thought, others to savor the goings-on. Finally, overcome by their own munificence or hay fever,
the flower-boys pinned the last blooms on themselves, somewhat selfishly perhaps,
but had also planned further surprises for those who swept through the aftermath of bloom and buttercup:
garlands and bouquets, planted in lockers and cupboards, timed to erupt either by fate or chance, had somehow been overlooked and missed out.
Experts are now trying to say how two apparently quiet kids from an apple-pie town could get their hands on a veritable rain-forest
of plants and bring down a whole botanical digest of one species or another onto the heads of classmates and teachers,
and where such fascination began, and why it should lead to an outpouring of this nature.
And even though many believe that flowers should be kept in expert hands only, or left to specialists in the field such as florists,
the law of the land dictates that God, guts and gardening made the country what it is today
and for as long as the flower industry can see to it things are staying that way.
What they reckon is this: deny a person the right to carry flowers of his own
and he’s liable to wind up on the business end of a flower somebody else had grown.
As for the two boys, it’s back to the same old debate:
is it something in the mind that grows from birth, like a seed, or is it society that makes a person that kind?


1.  What is literally happening in the poem?  What are the events?  Use quotes to prove you are correct.

2.  Video

3.  What words in the poem should have tipped us off?  Are there any hints?

4.  This poem asks a question at the end.  It is powerful.  Why?  How does the question lead us to the theme?  What is the theme of this poem, then, and why ?

Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Test



1.        Journal-

Explain what’s happening in this poem.  Go line by line and put it into your own words:

Oh, say can you see by the dawn’s early light
What so proudly we hailed at the twilight’s last gleaming?
Whose broad stripes and bright stars thru the perilous fight,
O’er the ramparts we watched were so gallantly streaming?
And the rocket’s red glare, the bombs bursting in air,
Gave proof through the night that our flag was still there.
Oh, say does that star-spangled banner yet wave
O’er the land of the free and the home of the brave?


2.       Two Versions.  One for awesomeness, one to think/write about and use our thinking skills to figure out what is going on.

3.       Alchemist Essay Exam.


Reading, To the end of the book, for next Tuesday.

Thursday, September 17, 2015

Writing and Thinking about Lit

Journal:  What does this poem mean, and why does it mean what it means?


Hope” is the thing with feathers - (314)

By Emily Dickinson
 
“Hope” is the thing with feathers -
That perches in the soul -
And sings the tune without the words -
And never stops - at all -

And sweetest - in the Gale - is heard -
And sore must be the storm -
That could abash the little Bird
That kept so many warm -

I’ve heard it in the chillest land -
And on the strangest Sea -
Yet - never - in Extremity,
It asked a crumb - of me.
 
 
 
 

The Why!

Some (very) brief notes about effective explication:
Good explication shows why you know what you say you know.
It refers back to the quote or fact you provided and helps readers understand how you reached the conclusion you stated.
It explains the logic you employed to create the meaning you create from the quote.
Your job is to persuade us to agree with you and understand the quote in the same way that you understand it:  we need to know how you figured out what it means.
Here is a pat way to organize explication:

1. Topic Sentence.
2. Quote to support topic.
3. What the quote means in terms of the topic.
4. How/Why you know what the quote means and how you connect it to the
     topic.
Example, Non-literary:

1.      There are many ways that someone can say you are dumb.
2.      For Example, Vanessa called me a “bonehead.”
3.      When she called me that name, she meant that I was dumb.
4.      A bonehead implies that one’s head is made only of bone.  If one’s head is composed solely of bone, then that person must have no brains.  If that person has no brains, they must be dumb, so, through metaphor, a bonehead means a person is stupid because he/she has no brain.

Practice….Your turn, non-literary:

1.      There are many proverbs that warn people not to accuse or blame others.
2.      For example, many of us have heard the quote, “Those who live in glass houses shouldn’t throw stones.”
3.      This means that you shouldn’t point your finger at others unless you are perfect.
4.      This means this because:
Now that you have it, let’s try it with some literature- First with a group and the last two on your own.
1.       Hamlet:
Though he describes the sky as a “majestical roof” covered with “gold fire,” Hamlet explains that, really, it is no more than a “foul and pestilent congregation of vapors.”  This means that Hamlet is displeased with the world.  This can be concluded because…

3.      In this scene of R&J, Juliet proclaims that should would rather “leap” off a tower, “walk in thievish ways,” “lurk where serpents are,” be chained with “roaring bears,” or be stowed with “dead men’s rattling bones” then marry Paris.  This means Juliet abhors the idea of marrying Paris.  This can be concluded because….
5.      In this scene from Hamlet, Claudius morns the “green” memory of his brother’s death which causes the kingdom to “bear…hearts in grief.”  He also says that though his brother’s death causes the “wisest sorrow,” they should think about him with “remembrance of ourselves.”  This means that the kingdom should move on from King Hamlet’s death.  This is known because…..

Tuesday, September 15, 2015

presentations, cont. extra alchemist time... Quotes?

1.  Let's talk about quotes.

2.  Presentations...

3.  Writing about lit, if time.

4.  Alchemist, HW.

Tuesday, September 8, 2015

Thursday-

1.  Presentations---/ Discussion about what's important from these presentations.


2.  If time allows, writing about literature, briefly.


3.  HW-  Reading, The Alchemist.  Finish Part 1.  He agrees to work because he needs to buy some sheep.

4.

Thursday, September 3, 2015

Today we worked on projects exclusively.  We are preparing for a presentation about the 7 habits of highly successful students.

HW-  work on projects.

Projects due Thursday, Sept. 10, have The Alchemist by the same day, please.

After projects, Poetry, in class, and The Alchemist, independently, with a focus on the Honors Topic (How the World Works: Global Perspectives) and how to write well.

NOTE FOR ERIC-  This could mean looking at educational systems around the world through the lens of our own experiences and then comparing/contrasting systems from a broad view.  


Tuesday, September 1, 2015

TS, cont.

1.  We played thinking skill games, learned names, worked on projects....